ashleyh · December 30, 2015 07:29
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 I dropped out of high school when I was 16 years old, mainly because of typical teenager concerns. Some months later,
                                                      ^--- too informal? -----------------------^
 two software engineers started a local software group that, in retrospect, had a great impact on me. Although I had
 previously been interested in programming, my greatest achievement was to write a second degree equation solver. Those
                                           ^---------------------------------?--------------------------------^
 two engineers were also open source advocates: it did not take me long before I installed Debian GNU/Linux.

 I began reading about and playing with the OS, network services, etc. It would not have gone
 any further if one of those engineers had not introduced me to Python while returning from a hackmeeting in Madrid.
                                                                                             ^---?-----^

 As a consequence, I began playing around with Python: I implemented Conway's Game of Life, a strategic board game called Abalone, etc.
 After a while, I discovered the Django web framework and began designing three or four little web pages.
 My friends were aware of my interests and one of them offered me my first job as a freelance developer. It did not take long
 before I got my first serious job: developing a web page for a local radio station that involved, among other things, uploading all
 their data to the Internet Archive automatically, flexible radio program structures and a really clean administration
 site. Nowadays the web page is actively used and the radio has become one of my most reliable clients.

 The two engineers proposed that I become part of their association whose objectives were the promotion of FOSS and the
 Basque language. As I carried on working on software projects, I noticed that, despite my self-managed education, I was
 lacking a more solid theoretical base. Having settled down a bit, I decided that I wanted my hobby and my job to
 become the focus of my studies too. So I picked up high school again; I expect to finish it this year without much trouble and with
 good grades (I imagine being a bit older helps). Although I enjoy all the subjects, my current favourite subjects are
 mathematics, physics and electronics.

 This past summer I was faced with the dilemma of having to decide what to do next. Both Basque and Spanish universities
 are a bit backwards in regards to computer science and software engineering. I have always liked Scotland (specially the
      ^-----------^ inappropriate
 highlands' landscape -- I love hiking) and I have a taste for the grammar and the idioms of the English language. So I
 searched for undergraduate courses, checked their programs and their prices and made my decision. Besides the
 mathematical and algorithmic part of software development, I am interested in studying software design patterns and
 different approaches to development, which is why I have decided to apply for Software Engineering courses.

 The next thing I did was to get my IELTS certificate. Although my native languages are Basque and Spanish, I can manage
 in Dutch, which has more similarities than differences with English, which helps, and I understand French. Being a
 software developer, I read and write lots of documentation in English but I'm quite shy at speaking it.

 I also began contributing to Django this year. At this moment, I own 18 tickets in the bug tracker, 13 of my commits made it into Django
 1.7 and I reviewed several patches from other people. I am currently working on self-referenced template inheritance
 handling along with another person; it will most likely become a medium sized feature of the 1.7 release. Working on
 Django gives me the opportunity to work together with very bright minds, to learn about big and complex project
 organization, to get my code, documentation and tests rigorously reviewed, to improve my technical communication skills
 and to help the Django community move forward. Although I will definitely continue taking part in the Django community,
 I am thinking of getting involved in Python's standard library too.
 ^-- you should mention how popular Django is

 My goal is to further improve myself in what I enjoy so much: software development.
 ^-------this sentence is kind of dangling ------^
	I dropped out of high school when I was 16 years old, mainly because of typical teenager concerns. Some months later,
	^--- too informal? -----------------------^
	two software engineers started a local software group that, in retrospect, had a great impact on me. Although I had
	previously been interested in programming, my greatest achievement was to write a second degree equation solver. Those
	^---------------------------------?--------------------------------^
	two engineers were also open source advocates: it did not take me long before I installed Debian GNU/Linux.

	I began reading about and playing with the OS, network services, etc. It would not have gone
	any further if one of those engineers had not introduced me to Python while returning from a hackmeeting in Madrid.
	^---?-----^

	As a consequence, I began playing around with Python: I implemented Conway's Game of Life, a strategic board game called Abalone, etc.
	After a while, I discovered the Django web framework and began designing three or four little web pages.
	My friends were aware of my interests and one of them offered me my first job as a freelance developer. It did not take long
	before I got my first serious job: developing a web page for a local radio station that involved, among other things, uploading all
	their data to the Internet Archive automatically, flexible radio program structures and a really clean administration
	site. Nowadays the web page is actively used and the radio has become one of my most reliable clients.

	The two engineers proposed that I become part of their association whose objectives were the promotion of FOSS and the
	Basque language. As I carried on working on software projects, I noticed that, despite my self-managed education, I was
	lacking a more solid theoretical base. Having settled down a bit, I decided that I wanted my hobby and my job to
	become the focus of my studies too. So I picked up high school again; I expect to finish it this year without much trouble and with
	good grades (I imagine being a bit older helps). Although I enjoy all the subjects, my current favourite subjects are
	mathematics, physics and electronics.

	This past summer I was faced with the dilemma of having to decide what to do next. Both Basque and Spanish universities
	are a bit backwards in regards to computer science and software engineering. I have always liked Scotland (specially the
	^-----------^ inappropriate
	highlands' landscape -- I love hiking) and I have a taste for the grammar and the idioms of the English language. So I
	searched for undergraduate courses, checked their programs and their prices and made my decision. Besides the
	mathematical and algorithmic part of software development, I am interested in studying software design patterns and
	different approaches to development, which is why I have decided to apply for Software Engineering courses.

	The next thing I did was to get my IELTS certificate. Although my native languages are Basque and Spanish, I can manage
	in Dutch, which has more similarities than differences with English, which helps, and I understand French. Being a
	software developer, I read and write lots of documentation in English but I'm quite shy at speaking it.

	I also began contributing to Django this year. At this moment, I own 18 tickets in the bug tracker, 13 of my commits made it into Django
	1.7 and I reviewed several patches from other people. I am currently working on self-referenced template inheritance
	handling along with another person; it will most likely become a medium sized feature of the 1.7 release. Working on
	Django gives me the opportunity to work together with very bright minds, to learn about big and complex project
	organization, to get my code, documentation and tests rigorously reviewed, to improve my technical communication skills
	and to help the Django community move forward. Although I will definitely continue taking part in the Django community,
	I am thinking of getting involved in Python's standard library too.
	^-- you should mention how popular Django is

	My goal is to further improve myself in what I enjoy so much: software development.
	^-------this sentence is kind of dangling ------^